|Reviews for A cold, dark tale|
| NeonAngels 6/2/11 . chapter 1
I, for one, loved this. I don't think the beginning was unnecessary at all. We kind of needed to know about the aunt. And it was so freakishly awesome! Gory, but awesome. Definately going to faves.
| Eternal Skies 9/16/09 . chapter 1
omigod, this is so freaky1 loved the ending! yay, she's gonna shoot everybody, heh
i enjoyed this story but i think the beginning was a little unnecessary..? i know, you had this idea of girl in the end killing her family and things like that so you wrote this, extra, like the whole story is written for the ending, i know, i've been throught stuff like that before.
so overall, this is pretty good but my advice is to cut the beginning and just talk about your dead aunt for lesser than a paragraph, and also describe more of the shooting/blood scene, it would be much better, y'know, focus on the crazy intent on killing..
hope this helps! :)