Amazing plot, hope you update soon

lolz, you messed up the dutch sentence XD it's: "Jij bent nog niet over je angst voor aanrakingen gekomen, toch, mijn nicht?"

neef is a male cousin XD

Grtz Silencia

aw... so sad... poor Eva I wanna kick that ex-boyfriend of hers' ass!

Grtz Silencia

This chapter was a bit confusing...

Grtz Silencia

ps: isn't it: Je m'apelle Madamoiselle Eva ?

This chapter made me laugh XD

Grtz Silencia

Eva's awesome too XD I love her energy and strong persona

Grtz Silencia

hahha now I like him even more! XD

Grtz Silencia

to be honest, I like Augustin X3 he sounds like the kind-brother type...

Grtz Silencia

Aww sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter! _

You need to translate what you say in other languages. Because its really annoying not knowing what they're saying.

I dont like google translator, i typed my french essay in english and in french, put the englush one through the translator and compared it was horbal at french, it actualy had me laughing it was that bad, intresting story by the way i think you did a good job devloping evas chariter.

Haha. He wanted her to change. How cute.

I was like WHAT? Before I knew she was tricking him 'cause I was like none of the one's I've ever read have anything like that in them!

Just makes me wonder what exactly he is remembering about her...with the flushing, and the not telling and all. Interesting :P It's all very short but I like, i like.

Her family is DEAD and she doesn't even care? I that this is a bit anticlimatic. I understand that you want it to be short and sweet, but this doesn't even make sense.

aww so touching and sad!