 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-11-28 . chapter 7Aww sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ |
 CaitlinEA 2009-11-25 . chapter 7You need to translate what you say in other languages. Because its really annoying not knowing what they're saying. |
 Asidill 2009-11-25 . chapter 7I dont like google translator, i typed my french essay in english and in french, put the englush one through the translator and compared it was horbal at french, it actualy had me laughing it was that bad, intresting story by the way i think you did a good job devloping evas chariter. |
 Pinkamoo 2009-11-22 . chapter 3Haha. He wanted her to change. How cute.
I was like WHAT? Before I knew she was tricking him 'cause I was like none of the one's I've ever read have anything like that in them! |
 Pinkamoo 2009-11-22 . chapter 2Just makes me wonder what exactly he is remembering about her...with the flushing, and the not telling and all. Interesting :P It's all very short but I like, i like. |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-11-21 . chapter 6Her family is DEAD and she doesn't even care? I that this is a bit anticlimatic. I understand that you want it to be short and sweet, but this doesn't even make sense. |
 That Random Girl Who Writes 2009-11-21 . chapter 6aww so touching and sad! |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-11-21 . chapter 6aw poor Eva. I like this chapter,but I've got some constructive criticism for ya'. I think it needs some more detail starting when Eva told Augustine about her family. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-11-19 . chapter 4I love these chapters! Especially with all her responses |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-11-19 . chapter 3LMAO!! ^_^ |
 XxSCENEandHEARDxX 2009-11-19 . chapter 2I love this story so far! ^_^ |
 That Random Girl Who Writes 2009-11-14 . chapter 4I love it! Augustin (or is it Augustine?) seems so cute! I can't wait to see how it progresses. Also, one of my friends is trying to annoyingly become fluent in japanese, so I'll haveta use koibito sometime around her. She also believes she can see ghosts, the same exact one as her BFF. I think it's all, to say it in your words "Merda de Galhina". But good job overall. |
 Pinkamoo 2009-11-13 . chapter 1This sounds cool as. Wonder what Augustin did to make her so wary of him? I really like his name though by the way. And hers. Reminds me of Black Cat. I don't know whether you know what that is...her name was kinda different, hers was Eve. But still. She's very cool. It's an anime.
Anyways, I'm liking it so far! |
 CaitlinEA 2009-11-12 . chapter 4Ok, this is weird and awkward and too fast pace. But in a good way. If that makes sense. Anyways, i like it. |
 LittleKafii 2009-09-08 . chapter 1O! gud story. Do you have an account on fanfiction? |