Aww sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

You need to translate what you say in other languages. Because its really annoying not knowing what they're saying.

I dont like google translator, i typed my french essay in english and in french, put the englush one through the translator and compared it was horbal at french, it actualy had me laughing it was that bad, intresting story by the way i think you did a good job devloping evas chariter.

Haha. He wanted her to change. How cute.
I was like WHAT? Before I knew she was tricking him 'cause I was like none of the one's I've ever read have anything like that in them!

Just makes me wonder what exactly he is remembering about her...with the flushing, and the not telling and all. Interesting :P It's all very short but I like, i like.

Her family is DEAD and she doesn't even care? I that this is a bit anticlimatic. I understand that you want it to be short and sweet, but this doesn't even make sense.

aww so touching and sad!

aw poor Eva. I like this chapter,but I've got some constructive criticism for ya'. I think it needs some more detail starting when Eva told Augustine about her family. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

I love these chapters! Especially with all her responses

LMAO!! ^_^

I love this story so far! ^_^

I love it! Augustin (or is it Augustine?) seems so cute! I can't wait to see how it progresses. Also, one of my friends is trying to annoyingly become fluent in japanese, so I'll haveta use koibito sometime around her. She also believes she can see ghosts, the same exact one as her BFF. I think it's all, to say it in your words "Merda de Galhina". But good job overall.

This sounds cool as. Wonder what Augustin did to make her so wary of him? I really like his name though by the way. And hers. Reminds me of Black Cat. I don't know whether you know what that is...her name was kinda different, hers was Eve. But still. She's very cool. It's an anime.
Anyways, I'm liking it so far!

Ok, this is weird and awkward and too fast pace. But in a good way. If that makes sense. Anyways, i like it.

O! gud story. Do you have an account on fanfiction?