"Horny hot, more than Hell." I like this line-it's very 'fiery' :P.

"Maybe it was me who wanted to f*ck the monsters inside of my head away." OH MY GOD! I love this line-it's amazing. I've had the same thought before lol.

I admit that this song confused me a little, but I think that's because I can't imagine a beat to it. I like how the first verse makes it sound like it's someone else, while the second reveals it's the person, though the broken and dirty mirror part sort of confuses me. The bridge is my favorite part.

You are good at writing songs. It's time you are looking for a group to perform them!