|Reviews for things like love and anger|
| Isca 9/12/09 . chapter 1
"And he's the one for you." I like the tone of this line-it has a rushed, almost breathless quality that's really striking.
"Truth is, best friends can't be lovers." Whoa. That's pretty intense stuff. This line is so true...
| May Elizabeth 9/9/09 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this poem. My one suggestion is that you use a bit more punctuation. When read aloud I was really running out of air.
| kloun mannequin 9/8/09 . chapter 1
it's always hard to be sincere with the feels.