it seems a song, it's cool, I like the irony in this.

There's something about the title of this that is just absolutely delicious.

I don't know what it is. But it flows fabulously.

And speaking of flow! I like the way the poem flows. It's a little bit broken, but that's a good thing in this instance. It goes along a main line, but there are parts where it branches off and then jumps back. It's neat.

Your use of parentheses also happens to be rather compelling.

I am not normally a fan of swearing in poems (okay, so I don't really care, it just usually doesn't fit in mine), but I really liked it here. It added the the mood of the poem.

I like the descriptive wording and the vocabulary choice!

Lastly, that last line is just...ugh. Exquisite. It's wonderful.

So top to bottom, head to toe, title to period, I love it. Yay (: