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give me november 2009-10-04 . chapter 1
And she'll sing of their angel's grace
their lilting melodies,
fragile fingers over piano keys
and the way the light flickered
as it burned

^ my favorite bit. it made me want to dance. you're writing is fanominal [i've never been sure how to spell that] very nice:)
Mienaku 2009-09-12 . chapter 1
I loved this one. It has that hint of hopeless anger tinged to it. Beautiful.
Mirabella 2009-09-08 . chapter 1
And she'll sing of their angel's grace
their lilting melodies,
fragile fingers over piano keys
and the way the light flickered
as it burned

Loved those lines! So beautiful and delicate!
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