 XxXYet-AnotherLazyTeenagerXxX 2009-10-21 . chapter 1I cant say that i liked it but i can say it was really well written and it must have taken i long time to write it so.
COOL! |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-20 . chapter 11Sweet.
There seemed to be a few commas that kind of... broke the flow... maybe you could consider taking them out? |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-07 . chapter 10That's sweet. I hope the guy's girlfriend likes it. :3 |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-07 . chapter 9I couldn't find the song you mentioned, but nice lyrics anyway... |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-06 . chapter 8I like this one ("In the End") the most of all these songs yet. It really brings out the frustrating sadness of so many historical events. That's just what it seems like to me. |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-06 . chapter 7About a betrayal, right...? |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-05 . chapter 6This is so true, and so deep. Especially the part about not seeing all the sides. |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-05 . chapter 5I could almost hear this when I read it. |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-03 . chapter 3That's so sweet. I especially liked the beginning when it said "I've given up on trying to write a melody that's just for you." |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-03 . chapter 2I had no clue what that was about, but, it was cool. XD
(And, yeah, I used to be really bad about reviewing but now I'm trying to go out of my way to give a few messages sometimes...) |
 Amai Dolciumi 2009-10-03 . chapter 1I like this one. Good luck with your band. |