"and out of their shining blood
fly horses"

truly amazing. you're poetry is the kind of creative and beautiful pieces that are hard to come about these days. honestly.:)

~Kaytlin

"Medusa wards evil." You know, that's a very interesting point - perhaps Medusa's gaze keeps her safe, in a sense, from the pursuits of men.

"He managed to rake her in, that old salt." Aha. Brilliant. I love that the speaker calls Poseidon 'that old salt.' That's priceless. ;)

"And out of their shining blood fly horses." Medusa bore two children from that rape episode: Pegasus (the winged horse) and Chrysador (a giant). That said, I did like this ending--it was very vivid. :)

Woohoo, Medusa! She's one of my favourite characters in Greek mythology.

This poem both fascinated me and scared me. I related to it. Very dark but very lovely. Great writing.