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Isca 2009-09-13 . chapter 1
"Swishing holy water between his cheeks and spitting praise so
your skin sizzled depth." I really like this part of the poem--the fact that Satan isn't effected by 'holy water' and enjoys watching other people 'sizzle' paints a very clear picture of his power and personality.
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