this was really good...it's so hard to explain why.

it just was.

the way you wrote it, and pom and alex and the tangelo...they told this gorgeous story. you did a wonderful job.

What a lovely story. I love that you don't need to write huge and ridiculously long paragraphs to convey the depression in it.

Keep up the gorgeousness.

amazing,

so real and vivid,

beautiful.