 PrincessCherokee01 2009-11-26 . chapter 9Aww! Yay! They finally got together! :D I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 monYY 2009-11-24 . chapter 9hey! i liked this chapter is cool hahah aw they are so adorable |
 pinkeclipse 2009-11-23 . chapter 9love the story!! |
 Scorpiongurl324 2009-11-22 . chapter 9Finally! Update SOON!
-Kia
PS: The necklace was a very nice touch!! |
 Aruka Ten 2009-11-22 . chapter 9OMG! best chapter so far! i'd like to vote for Nate and Nicole, they r just so cute! ok, love the chapter, write more!
~Aruka Ten :D |
 Ruby Kart 2009-11-22 . chapter 9hahaha, you should see the smile on my face. Gah! I'm such a sap, you know that.
So it's really cute. The way the whole thing was set up and the setting. Kale took it surprisingly well, which was just idk a little unrealistic for me, but you don't want to drag out the drama. The thing with Cain, well I love his gift!! Again, after seeing him jealous and angry and cold it was weird for him to suddenly warm up and make the first move, but it shows it was genuine.
I don't like plot twists, I wish it ended there and they all lived happily ever after. Sigh. I can't blame you though, I do plot twists all the time, but now I know how my reader's feel!!
Update soon |
 rathina 2009-11-22 . chapter 9AH
finally they make up
i love it
i hope it stays like that
i would be very happy
l0l
=D
update
~rathina |
 ani-chi 2009-11-22 . chapter 9aww!! yay! they finally got together! |
 pbgurl 2009-11-22 . chapter 9My response to your authors note at the end: What?! Your evil, lol! ;P
I knew that when you got them together this early in the game that you would have something up your sleeve for them in the future. As to what it is, I do not know. I just hope that whatever does happen, they at least be together in the end...I hope :(
As for this chapter, the part with her uncle and the necklace got me misty eyed, I'll admit it. ^_^
and...YAY! There finally together!
-Liz :D |
 tiktok09 2009-11-22 . chapter 9aww finally!! haha they seem so cute together:) ah i love this story-keep up the amazing work! |
 monYY 2009-11-17 . chapter 8hey a little cool |
 tiktok09 2009-11-16 . chapter 8i love this story its so good!! keep up the great work:D |
 rathina 2009-11-15 . chapter 8aw
i hope cain accepts her appology and they get together
hahahahaha
thank you for updating i thought you forgot about us
l0l
update soon please
~rathina |
 Caleyy 2009-11-15 . chapter 8Im not going to lie, this was a tad dissappointing. Not that it was bad or anything bc it wasn't it was good. But it was justt so short. But i cant wait for more XD |
 LethalxLilly 2009-11-14 . chapter 8darnski.
i thought it was going to be something mind blowing.
not just a filler.
lol.
but oh well.
update soon, or ill spam you on aim. |