Wow! You've done a great job with the story. I've never read anything like it. You're a good author! Can't wait to read more of your fics.

"But seeing as she’s helped to bring a string of grisly murders to an , "
an end

"with the man who’s picture was staring back"
whose

Anyways, this story was stellar. Very gripping and real, and the suspense was definitely there too (usually a hard element to incorporate). I enjoyed your twist and turns, and Alexis' relationship with Ryan. Scene 4 was particularly poignant to me regarding the two and showed well how much they cared about each other.

And damn. I enjoyed Dan XD Well done with him. And the story overall, too. Some might say it was too long or something, but I think you spent the perfect amount of word on it and you told what needed to be told. Since it was an engrossing read time just flew by.

Keep up the good work!
Frac

Sweet. I loved it. This is definitely one of my favorite stories; you worked it out quite well and everything made sense. I like how it seemed to all come together and I never even could have thought that Dan was behind it all.

Wonderful job.

(By the way, I'm the person who wrote that challenge)