 Bruised Pristine 2009-09-10 . chapter 1Love, love, love this.
Throughout I had a very positive almost dreamy image of a teenage boy daydreaming in a fantastical dark way and then bam it hits you like a freight train and it's incredible.
Gorgeous images all the way through. I'm a sucker for twisted beauty and the sexual undercurrent really works well. The last line honest to God leaves me breathless, so tangible almost, definitely bitter and pained.
On another note, yes they are all very much gorgeous men and funnily enough I imagined the other to look very much like Josh Holloway.
I would also love to see this as a longer fic. It's such a wonderful idea and I for one would enjoy it a lot.
Can't wait for the OBWAT update and you know I'll be reviewing, but until then, lovelove.
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