I'm finally caught up to this piece, which makes me happy. I've accomplished one of many goals. I rather like the interactions and happy scenes of this story's chapter so far. Update soon, my friend.

A short chapter but a good one. Nice interactions between Jamie and Rene here as well. I also felt really bad for Paulie, poor guy.

Great updates, man. I hate when the hard drive crashes. I've had it happen to me and have lost stories and music, everything. Good luck on getting this story finished.

~SirScott

I really like the building relationship between Rene and Jamie and I'm still really liking Angie as well. There are so many good characters in this! I can't wait for your next chapter.

You're welcome btw, you've always been one of my favorite authors here so I'll stick by you no matter what. As for your chapter, this keeps getting better and better. I really like Alia/Angie and with each chapter, I like her more and more. She's probably becoming my favorite character. I do feel sorry for poor Jamie. I hope she doesn't die.

This chapter was really interesting and I love the imagery you put in as well. Definitely full of action and suspense as well. I certainly hope that Jamie will be alright. I especially like the scenes with the glass of water and the blank room for some reason. They were very surreal and I could imagine them clearly in my mind.

The actions really fast paced in this one. Rene's character is really interesting. Keep up the good work.

~SirScott

Good work with this chapter. I know what you mean about how writing a story can make more chapters than you orginally planned. Wow, I have been reading your work for years now after checking the dates when you first posted your work. The fights in this chapter were classics and the surprises are always amazing.

~SirScott

That was a cliffiness of hanging. I hope they defeat Kyle.

~SirScott

Definitely an interesting chapter. I liked the fight scene between the animal masks and Jaime. This is definitely getting good. I can't wait until your next chapter!

This is classic Darket writing. I liked how the masked thugs got what was coming to them. Keep up the good work.

~SirScott

Wow, Jamie's pretty tough the way she handled the shotgun was amazing. I like how the quick pace of this story.

~SirScott

That was an action-packed chapter. Definitely a great story all in all and I'm relieved to see you back on, writing stories again. I hope to get another chapter from you soon.

This is getting very interesting so far. I really like Paul's character for some reason, I guess I'm just attracted to those types and I'm really liking Rene as well. Now, it's time to go on to the next chapter! I'm getting hooked on this story!

Man, it's been a while since I've seen any of your stuff floating around here. Welcome back to the manga world, my friend! I've missed you!

I've got to say that I really liked the beginning of this story. It was very dark and the speech that was given by Dr. Giovanni was definitely interesting. There were a few spelling errors

You can Paul should go see the concert instead of me.” Lulu said quickly. Jamie smiled.

I think it was supposed to be and instead of can.

Marlene covered her head and continue to scream franticly as the liquid soaked her clothes.

'franticly' is Frantically

Those were the only ones I caught, so not bad indeed. I actually found this story when I went to check updates on my newest story 'Shattered Illusions' so I'm glad that I did at that point in time.

This was definitely a great read and I'll try my best to keep up with your posts. I enjoyed ShadowCop, Blood Stained Rose, The Drifter and Subject One so I'm sure I'll love this just as much!