I really like your story. I think it's really cute and I love the romance. Please continue to update it.

A loyal reader!

I just wanted to say that I really, really like your story. I'm currently supposed to be doing some homework I've postponed until today, but I just can't seem to break away from the computer screen. Your writing style is very good and the story is well crafted and really interesting. It keeps me wondering what they're all going to do next. :D The best word for it is 'addictive'.

It's a shame you haven't had more reviews for your story.

It has an interesting and original premise which has been sadly lacking on FP recently.

It does seem however, that you haven't yet decided what will happen to Esther once she reaches Angoli, as everyone seems to have differing opinions. Will he hurt her or does he idolise her?

This is perhaps something to work on.

I look forward to seeing where this story will go.

Brenna

OMGSH.

Damnit. I knew something was up with Martin. I knew it!

God. And stupid Roden and Manda had to bring him right to Esther too. Yeesh. Idiots.

Anyway, update soon! :D

I really really like this story, please keep writing it. I typically dislike some fictionpress stories a lot because they are all so juvenile but this actually has an interesting plot and I really want to know what happens next :) I really like the character of Max, I love those emotionally damaged guys haha

*gasp* no! i knew martin was a bad guy! i never really liked him. and he HAD to come take her, and just when she was starting to warm up to max :(

i really really like this story and i cant wait for the next chapter, this cliffhanger is killing me .

and i love max, he's great :)

manda is a tad annoying, but that's how she's supposed to be, right?

great story and i cant wait for the next chapter :D

Holy Cow, this is fantastic. I really love the detail and description. It's different from usual story plots-unique! Please continue, I'm eager to read.

this is so good! i hope more people read this story. I absolutely love it. very well written and very interesting.

I love this story. The main characters are so likeable and relatable and the action is fantastic. I'm definitely on the edge of my seat and can't wait for the next chapter.

This story is soo good! I couldn't tear my eyes away!

I cannot wait for the next update. Max is great, hope things go well for him.

Tsk tsk to Roden for not trusting him... :(

I liked the way you had both points of view in this chapter because in the previous I always found myself wanting to know what was happening to Ess and Max.

Great chapter! :)

Your story deserves more reviews than it has. Update soon!

I am in love with Max, his character is very interesting because we only get to see him from another persons point of view.

Great chapter! You have thrown me in a loop! I'm so confused, but I'm so intrigued that I can't stop re-reading the story. I suppose my answers will be remedied soon. Once again fantastic plot so far.

I barely know her but manda is quite annoying. Good job though.