so logan ended up with crystal..too bad..i like it if he did end up with charity...o well...thanks for ending this story...going to read forrest story now..ahha...

i really enjoyed this story :) i'll be honest and say it probably wasn't as good as river and fallon's story, but it was good all the same. if there was one thing i had to pick to distinguish between the two, i would have to say that this doesn't deal with such strong emotions. wait, maybe i phrased that wrong. i guess, i didn't feel as emotional/connected with the characters' emotions as i did with the other story. i still thought it was good though.
i definitely subconsciously expected charity and logan to get together, so i was pleasantly surprised when that wasn't the case. but i'm glad that crystal and logan ended up together. don't know about dalton and charity's end though. as much as i thought they suited, i think there was too much swaying of charity's emotions to show that they were truly meant to be. or whatever you want to call it, haha.
thanks for posting this and i look forward to reading your other works.

jess

As a big fan of LG, I like this ending a lot better. It's nice that you left them at that point, particularly since you've got a sequel. When you used the pronouns alone for the mystery confession, I immediately knew who they were, and it's a good sign that a reader can pick up the characters' relationships and qualities so well. I feel like this story was a bit less intimate than LG though.

The story was built up well, and you genuinely kept the characters on their toes in a way that wasn't contrived. Lots of drama, but it didn't make the reader have to suspend their belief in logic.

“I said that River's much better than Logan. Oh, and am I the only one who thinks it's a little weird that Logan and Fallon used to fuck all the time and now she's dating River? Does she ever compare the two?”

As I recall, Fallon said that River was better. I'm enjoying the extremely tangled web you've got going here. It's a bit tiring to keep track of, but that makes it all the more interesting.

Perhaps its just me, but I couldn't stay with the story and skimmed through the last parts. The C- thing was extremely confusing especially since they were all introduced one right after the other. There were many complicated love-lust relationships, a ridiculous "love hexagon" hence, I couldn't really see much proper character development like in your other works. In short, I'm sorry I didn't like this story very much, and I don't think that this is one of your best works, but I shall still look forward to reading the most interesting Masterson, Forrest :)

P/S - I hope you are not offended, and I still think you are one of the rising authors on FP and will continue to read and review your other works.

Too many proclamations of love made it not as realistic especially with so many things going on at once but logan's 'speech' at the end helped in making it a bit more realistic. Not the best of the series but it ties in with your story about river. I wonder if you wrote them at the same time or yet the storylines for both?

So it's over- it took me this long to find the time to read it b/c my schedule is fuckin' ridiculous!! I have to say that I was kinda disapointed when Charity and Logan didn't get together, but I do admit that it really would've been weird for both Kennedys to end up with a Masterson. It was a really good story and DEFINITELY kept me on my toes at all times!!

I can't wait to start Forrest's story- I can only imagine what kind of hellion he'll end up being with three older brothers like Logan, River, and Brock! lol :) :)
~Robyn Night~

LOVED IT
i loved the ending
as well as the fact it was Crys he got together with rather than charity
nice work on avoiding a most cliched ending, my friend (Y)
well done ^_^

It was fabtastic! I really liked it. Though I must say- I continually switched in my mind who should have been with who. First it was Charity with Logan, then it was Calista with Logan and Charity with Dalton, then it was Charity with Logan (again.), then it was FINALLY Crystal with Logan and Charity with Dalton. It took a while, but I'm glad you did it. Made the story much more interesting. Adding to faves [x

YAY Charity+Dalton in the end :D
Thanks for writing this

The ending is so... unexpected. I thought for sure that Logan would end up with Charity and be in a mess since Fallon and River are dating and fucking each other. But this is just original. Keep up the good work! When Logan said "thank you" to Crystal, I immediately flashed back to Ryan Atwood and Marisa in the O.C. I loved that show.

aww i like this ending better than charity and logan ending up together

aw finally finished...im so sad but im looking forward to whatevers coming up next which i currently cant remember.
i loved the ending,i'm glad all the couples are back together and as i have mentioned b4 i loved how it was very complicated and all
Although everyone expected a Charity/Logan ending im actually quite glad that it wasnt cuz it would be kinda weird and all...like u said urself a bad cliche.
As for crystal/logan im just hoping he wont mess up again ad do something really stupid,knowing how big a man whore he is.
Thx for finishing this one too, i know how hard it must be with college?! i think lol. So kudos to you for that!

Haha yes! i loved the story! In the beginning when there were signs of charity/logan, i was kind of iffy on whether or not i'd like the story because i really loved fallon/river and it would just be weird if charity and logan got together. But when the idea of cali/logan came about, I started to not want to read the story... i just didn't think cali/logan were a good match. So that's why i'm so happy with the story- because crystal/logan are a great match and i LOVE the idea of dalton/charity.

great job :)

oh my gosh!! k.. loved the story! but SERIOUSLY? you gotta at LEAST do a one shot about charity and Dalton!! ya left me hangin there! oh.. great story!!