This was quite good ^_^
It had a slightly dark feel, and the sense of tragedy is there. However, the introduction of "However, the Great Beast never truly existed. Oh sure, It had existed," was not proper at all

This is a nice mithology, i hope you passed the coursework. I like the start where the beast split in two and the way the serpents came into being. I also like the imprisionment for all evil things, that was kinda cool. And the bit where she told humans not to eat animals, woops that didnt work:P This did really seem as though it would be in a mithology book, so well done.