|Reviews for Watch Over My Life|
| Gypsy Pen 1/2/13 . chapter 31
Great story, totally made me cry.
| Felrain 12/2/12 . chapter 31
Such an interesting story :O
| DuchessYappingDog 12/2/12 . chapter 19
Man, I hope she doesn't decide to go through with the pregnancy, because I feel like it probably means she will die. And Jake wouldn't want to have the baby anyways if it means that she dies. :/
| StorieLuver101 12/1/12 . chapter 19
I Love this story! Keep up the updates!(:
| Guest 11/27/12 . chapter 19
Please put second part up! Love Jess and Jake.
| Elle.Louise 4/26/12 . chapter 12
I've read the 14 chapters that you have up on here and i am dying to know what happens next aha. You have a fantastic style of writing and oh my god, wow, the sexual tension between Jessica and Jake. I was wondering if you were going to put up the rest of the story again? I just really want to know what happens next :)
| cosmopolitan 4/8/12 . chapter 14
HOLY SHIT I miss this story!
I just found it after searching for it for ages and what a treat. it was such an incredible pleasure to reread this one!
| TheRaven'sFeather 3/20/12 . chapter 14
Hey, there. This seems like an interesting story. I have to admit, Jess is pretty tough to be willing to stay there when she found out that Jake also worked there. I probably would have tried to find another job. Anyways, the main thing I was not found of in this story was that I found that things were not connected plot wise very well. You introduce backstories in one chapter, with no suggestion of the backstory beforehand, and then completly forget about it after the chapter. Examples of this is Jess' relationship with Rob. This subplot was not even hinted at before, which makes me think that it was not planned and were made up on the spot. And after the chapter where they were used, they were never mentioned again. Another example is how Jake stood her up when they were younger. I know that this is mentioned mainly to describe Jake's character, but Jessica never even brought it up with him after that.
Also I feel like Jess' and Jake's relationship moved really fast. Jessica went from down right hating him to admitting to herself that she cared about him really quickly. It is also quite topsy turvey if you know what I mean. Characters develop and then in the next chapter all of the development is gone. Why does Jake hook up with Ciara for a week after he and Jess become closer? And why does Sharon not get mad at him for it? Also I feel like although Jake has told Jess that she has problems letting people in, she's actually kind of open. At least to me.
Wow I sounded mean there. But I figured I'd tell you honestly what I thought of it and try to help you improove. All in all this is a really good story, it just doesn't flow that well.
| cutepanda 2/29/12 . chapter 14
LOVE IT, absolutely love it! Love the way you write and talk about sexual tension haha!
God, Jake sounds hot! :D
| xxcubanangelxx 2/23/12 . chapter 13
I really hope you decide to update again soon, I really love this story :)
| Em 1/5/12 . chapter 12
Glad to see an update to this story.. I love where this is going! Can't wait to read more
| anon 11/20/11 . chapter 11
hope this story doesn't go by unfinished.. it was a great find and hope it continues
| funkysam94 9/20/11 . chapter 11
great story! update soon! :D
| cosmopolitan 8/18/11 . chapter 9
ugh, soooo good, hope you update soon!
| cosmopolitan 8/1/11 . chapter 11
gahhh it's been so long and this story was just randomly on my mind so i thought id pop in to read it again.
such a beautiful piece of fiction, and i cant wait for the next installment!