"the sky rains as if needs to cry,"... if it needs

"it’s hard to get why the tears,/angels are always by His side,"... are you trying to say that the tears are angels? If so, then you need a comma after angel. If not, then I have no idea what this means.

Definitely not my favorite piece because the idea has been done many times before...

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Such a lovely piece, the ending I especially liked. Keep it Up!

The title to this doesn't make much sense to me, as well as the line "It's hard to get why the tears". Why the tears what? And if there's nothing from heaven, why are the angels watching?

It's a nice, short poem, but just a bit confusing is all.

Interesting piece, I couldn't get into a rhythm, the flow was very rough, especially the second line. But overall, interesting concept. Please keep writing.

~Anna~ ^_^