i really liked the first part of this one
it is a little heartbreaking, don't give up hope!
though sometimes the best art is born out of tragedy

Again, you have a talent! Especially in how you structure and set out your poetry... its lovely!

I have to say the first verse is my favorite in this poem. I like they way the poem as a whole is written. It gives the feeling that the speaker is running, from or to something. Well written.