Hm...you get bored easily in History now don't you? haha. well, this is a good poem, & you may not be a poet, or as you said, a crappy poet, but you do express your feelings in these poems, which is also good.

I don't see why you think this is a crappy poem, it's really good! Then again, I don't think my poems are all that great either...

I like how it is written and how it tells a story in the abstract way, it's really nice.

Good job )