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Wrath of Cthulu 2009-11-10 . chapter 1
When you twist and turn and dance about, does your skirt fly up? When I picture you in my head I always see you wearing that outfit that Hellraiser wears with the long black skirt that looks like leather. I want one of those. I can see this poem being put to music, some kind of sad funeral dirge sung by a deep voice in the pitch black.
der fiddlesticks 2009-10-28 . chapter 1
That's my new nick name for Grandpa now. Grumble Bear.
Lady Despair I am happy to help you hate things on your knees.
This poem is pure Biblical chaos before the 'let there be light'. You are the exhalation of the restless Leviathan.
Lady Despair 2009-10-20 . chapter 1
When I saw the title, falling up, it made me think of being wasted and falling up the stairs. People have said it is not possible, but I think I proved them wrong and it's good to know I am not the only one with this little problem. You have proven to not only be a dark and sombre poet, but a humorous one as well. You weild this art like a well crafted sword, with such ease it makes me want to hate you for it. But you are the kind of writer that demands I hate on my knees. A position that with my pride I am not fond of. You are an inspiration to us all.
The Gentle Troubadour 2009-09-30 . chapter 1
Dude, you're cracking up. Seriously, you have gone the way of the crazy genius. I knew it would happen. I knew it from the moment we met. The second I hit the line that says "A grumble bear with attitude" I said to myself 'that's it...he's gotten into his boat and rowed off into the distance laughing maniacally'. Enjoy your trip, justinsane. ;)
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