| Reviews for Walk Away |
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khjgfhjhvg 2/21/11 . chapter 1Wow. Nice, it kinda...stuck-with me, those last words. Simple, and moving. :D |
Kimberly Vang 1/1/10 . chapter 1 It's a very short poem, but it's still good. It sort of rhymes..lol...well to me that is. & of course, I like it! |
jessedaro 12/13/09 . chapter 1I really like how the alternating lines can be read as a dialogue or a monologue: I had to this / we weren't meant to be/ I was breaking your heart with the response But I'll always love you / I should have told you / But I felt the same way and that it all ends: As I watched you walk away. I don't know why that struck me as somehow exactly how I felt when a relationship of mine ended, and I just silently stood and took it thinking those lines you have in italics - and even though I never said the words aloud, we ended up in the same place, walking away. Does that even make sense? ;-) What I'm trying to say is: You moved me. |