LOL nice one! Funny but serious too :) Great job overall. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

PS - Thanks for reading my work! :) *gives you cookies*

I like this, it's funny, but still makes a good point.

I like the ending too, your use of italics and parenthesis worked well to make the last line an aside.

Nice job!

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aw, cool piece, I like the imagery from the starting, I really like the metaphor with the toy.

To get along with women

It helps to be a man.
-- Nice :)

Loving the way you write!

This has a flowy rhyme scheme that reminds me almost of a child's book which makes the twist at the end that much more poignant. Nicely crafted.


PS. thanks for the review. I will definately edit the typos and work on the wording.

That's true. Women like men to act like a man.

~SirScott

:) totally true!

Clever! I completely agree. As far as I can remember, this is your first political poem, and you've done it well!

Very cute!
I especially like the rhyming eding. :)
But also the line "who can mist her eye" would have to be one of my favourites. :)