This was sad and it touched me and made tear up.
Good story and keep writing.

...Snow

woah.

this is definitely not ugly.

i feel this story in some core place inside.

this is amazing.

This made me cry you know, at first when I read through it I got teary but then.. my mum was like what's so sad and i broke down describing it.
Your story packed a punch.. It lingered with me and this is the.. 3rd time i've read it and i doubt it'll be the last.

Gorgeous. Gorgeous. Gorgeous. The best of your oneshots yet ^_^

I love the way you weaved the language in this, there was a duality that fit well with the flipside idea, like when you said 'summer folding into winter'.

The dialogue is heartbreaking and I absolutely adore it all. God, just the way he cries for him not to go, so horribly beautiful.

What really hits me though is Sam's death. It was like a physical blow, a massive kick to the gut and then a grief that doesn't really lift which really helps me to relate to Isa.

So, all in all, just brilliant as usual ^_~

Oh, and the song was Off He Goes, right?

lovelove

oXBruisedPristineXo

Fucck man I think that this is my fav of all your one shots... why does he always leave?! and when he finally wants to stay!! Sammy dies! dammit why did you kill himT_T Wow I love the way it's written soo soo wow I'm going to reread it tomorrow but I love the way you have written this, you should write more like this! it's really flowing and beautiful but you still suck for killing Sam! But then the story wouldn't have the same impact but it's so sad your last moments and you can't even spend them with your loved one...then again he should have told him! So so beautiful...


Off he goes? pearl jam..(pretty obvious if it isxD)