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HazeleyedHoney 2009-11-15 . chapter 5
Awesome! Update as soon as you can.
luvsillyllama 2009-11-15 . chapter 5
Good story!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Lerene 2009-11-15 . chapter 5
great chapter
Reglach 2009-11-13 . chapter 5
another great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens between colby and ash, seems there is so tension there... can't wait for more!
alwaysfaith 2009-11-12 . chapter 5
they're all so cute~ < 3

Normally I HATE vampire or werewolf stories but this one is amazing.
I can't wait to see what happens next.

One thing; If colby says yes to ashlin, learns the name of who he wants, why can't he just tell Roden anyway?
That's what I would do. I figure if Roden knows, then they will all bunch up and be safe. I guess Ashlin could probably hurt someone a little, but not kill 'em. So I don't think that would be as bad as say.. him knowing about someone and taking over the world, or something evil like that.

can't wait for an update ;)

- Faith
Esquirella 2009-11-12 . chapter 5
This is an awesomely cool story!
StoicCrying 2009-11-12 . chapter 5
This was posted on my birthday! -yay-. I absolutely loved it- mostly because it gave a little more insight of Colby. I actually don't like Nadine >.> I think she's trying to hard to make a place in the pack *totally on Colby's side*.

please update sooN!
Hide-and-Go-Seek 2009-11-11 . chapter 5
can't wait for the next chapter! this one was really good and just makes me want more! I really want to see how this plays out and I can't help but wonder if a romance will occur between Roden and Colby! I can't wait to find out!
ps- PLEAASE update the other story soon!I'm dying here! Must know Must know!
HGS
Reglach 2009-11-08 . chapter 4
love it, hows the chater coming?!
Hide-and-Go-Seek 2009-10-11 . chapter 4
I like this story. i hope colby finds a way out of this without disappointing his pack! i'm reading a pack's loyalties as well and really like that one too. i hope you hurry with both updates!
~*~HGS~*~
Lerene 2009-09-27 . chapter 4
great chapter
The youngen 2009-09-26 . chapter 4
So far this is one of the best werewolf stories I've read in a long time. I really love Colby and at first I liked Ashlin. I thought he was gonna be a sexy love interest but now I want to beat him with a baseball bat. A silver baseball bat. How dare he threaten Colby. Gr. Anyways, love the story. I like how you're applying how wolves are in real life to how the werewolves act. Also its a nice change to see the main character not be a social butterfly with humans and also be loved by his pack. I'm looking forward to the development of Colby and Roden relationship. Great story and I'm looking forward to your next update.
frogs of war 2009-09-24 . chapter 4
Boy, I thought Ashlin was going to seduce Colby into doing what he wanted.
StoicCrying 2009-09-24 . chapter 4
Omg...I can't help but like Ashlin o.o He's my kinda top!

please update sooN!
Yes 2009-09-24 . chapter 4
Yay an update! I usually don't read stories such as this, but you got me hooked! Can't wait for an update (hope its soon >.
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