|Reviews for almost but not quite|
| thursdays and rain 9/14/09 . chapter 1
you describe things wonderfully here.. and i love the format.. keep writing!
| Eponine254 9/14/09 . chapter 1
I like the sense of movement in this poem... It's very buoyant! You captured the sense of reaching up to the sky through your positioning of "fingertips-", and I particularly liked the "Tepid applause." Much warmer applause from me!