That was an awesome read! Love the Blues Clues bit. So Blue is really a girl? I always thought that he's a boy though..

Liked it a lot ^^

I love it.
It reminds me so much of me and my boy.
Well done, very good.

Oh gosh! This is really a great story! I love every inch of it. :)) Nice job done! XD

So I loved this story. And it's basically my life. I really connected to it... because this is the situation I'm in right now. Ugh I loved it. But it made me sad. But that's not your fault. I promise I won't start another sentence with but. :D
Keep writing!

So sweet:D I need muffins :D
Great one-shoot.

So, I fucking love this story. The character names were really unique, but every time I saw Raisie, I thought of Raisin, so that's what I called her.

Anyways, is that what you have to do when your phone rings and the teacher takes it? You have to pay fifteen dollars to get it back? In my school they usually give you a detention...

And, you make me contemplate making muffins and putting the mix into a blender. Damn you Raisin!

If I was a guy and I talked to my grandma on the phone and told me where beaters were and to wear a condom, I would think that she'd want me to wear a condom while making muffins. xD Which I think would be fucking hilarious.

Lorne, Lorne, Lorne. I feel like because her name rhymes with the word porn, that that should be her job. xD

Oh my god! Fire crotch!

And...wow...random. When she finally calls him, she's saying that Blue is somehow a dude. Woah. But it's okay, because I thought that she was a boy too. Until when she became that puppet thingy... And at least there were a few male characters, like Mr. Pepper and Steve. But Joe is for the win!

Holy fucking shit! How did Raisin get to LA?! :D

And now that the actual story is over, let the X and the X begin!

Oh my fucking god! I loved this story too much. And I love you Lexi-kins. ♥

I love this :) I absoultely love this. Very creative and very endearing.

Is that even possible to fall in love with someone you've never met in person? But regardless, that was a cute story. =]

Aww cute =]

Uterly adorable! Loved it! Very original. Awesome job :)
-Aria

No freaking way.
Blue's a girl??
I even googled it and you're right. I just sat there gaping for 15 minutes.
I can't believe blue's a girl.
I totally understand how Rai feels.

Cute story. I agree with Lorne's view on MJ ;)
~Annoyance

Whoo so I'm actually the one who issued this challenge, and I loved this response! I really really loved this. I thought it was inventive and adorable and fit the requirements magically. Je l'adore. (: I'm totally adding this to my c2. :]

Great job with this; you created believable characters and created a sweet and funny story. I'd love to see more.

Favorited. This was pretty much amazing. You did really good for your first challenge. (: It was a nice pick-me-up from a stupid review for a hard test tomorrow. Ugh. Nicely done.