|Reviews for Granted|
| ivyfurl 9/18/09 . chapter 1
| he ate my soul 9/16/09 . chapter 1
It's really well written, I'll grant you that. However, I personally don't think it lived up to the potential it could have. I mean absolutely no offense, but after reading it I wasn't filled with any sort of empathy for the rough,day-by-day street life he lived. There where definitely strong parts such as the descriptions of the guitar and how you left the aching struggle he has as a beautiful singer, living day in and day out.