|Reviews for Diamonds|
| simpleplan13 1/9/10 . chapter 1
I have to say I don't like the last line. I just don't get it. The piece is about the future, not about forever so why mention that?
I do like the first part though. I like how you start it out as if you know the future but realize you don't. I think we all feel like that. It's very realistic and relateable. Nicely done.
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