aww jonah! whatta sweetheart. totally love this prequel. i'll move on to the sequel soon, though those two as a couple doesnt really do it for me. i'll probably change my mind when i actually read it.

After reading To Feel The Sun, I was happy to know that you made an one-shot and with Jonah's pov nonetheless. This was really cute and I'm so happy that Gracie and Jonah end up happy together.

Aww it's cute but oh so sad :(

xx

ali

Hey, I love this story and "To Feel the Sun," but after rereading this one-shot for the second time, I've noticed that you type a lot of commas in places where there really doesn't need one.

i loved it and i loved the to feel the sun story too, good work :)

haha, when it said "thump thump thump" i couldn't help but think about B2K's song , i even started singing. If you know about them... anyho LOVE YOUR WORK

Thanks for ending it this way. It's almost poignant to me, and I'm sorry I can't explain further.

Technically speaking, there were some spelling mistakes in there and a few missing words, but overall the piece flowed nicely. I have to commend you for the way you portrayed the main characters, especially Jonah. Seeing Grace through his eyes made things interesting for me.

I had always toyed with the thought of reading "To Feel the Sun." Now I may actually act on it.

Wow.

I was so happy to see that you put this up, because I was thinking it would be great to hear the 2-month-fax-nagging thing mentioned in 'To Feel the Sun'.

...and this exceeded my expectations!

And you even managed to change your writing style enough to make it clear the point-of-view for each story was of a different person. (Did that make sense?)

Anyway, I'm going to go do something other than stalk your profile.

- Rebekah

that was totally adorable. "What he really meant when he said, 'As you wish', was 'I love you.'"

I love Jonah, yes I do! D

Loved this companion!

love it! i definitely vote you do a to feel the sun in jonah's pov! id love to read that

this was a side of Jonah i really wanted to see.

i love his friends, so cool. Didn't expect him to have such out going friends

it was adorable..

Simply adorable. I love Jonah!:)

aw. Very cute. I love Jonah and grace!

Ri

Perfect.

I think to me it seemed like a metaphor for his feelings,

and the title was perfect.

The fax machine was like a metaphor...

He just hadn't 'sent' his feelings properly yet.