A unique and intriguing piece. I like the point of view, although I personally feel like the detail about the channel he's watching could be dropped to make it intentionally vague for the readers (unless it's your intention; but because it's in second person, it could be connected to everyone.)

Overall, great job with this. I like the pacing and significance.

Correction:

{You rest your eyes on them anyway, and the room becomes air moving as you watch her skin wrinkle with her flexing and pointing and moving around.} "and the room becomes air moving" confused me. Maybe "and the room becomes moving air"?