"Your tribal paradise." I really like the idea here Heaven can be both 'Christian' and 'Pagan.'

"I will not deny you." Powerful ending!

I love the imagery in this poem my favourite line :

"Though star-crossed fate has wronged me into sorrow, you receive all that you desire."

Also I like the honesty, perhaps that is the wrong word, i like the truth in it, i feel i can relate to it.