 SometimesRed 2009-11-23 . chapter 1That is very very beautiuful.Anniversay of My grandmother's death today , so it was a perfect day to find this. So sweet yet deeply moving. You have a real talent and gift for writing . My deepest sorrows to you , I know how the death of a family member can hurt.
Regards SR |
 Kate Marshall 2009-10-17 . chapter 1"Duerme con los angeles, Rosita..."
I really like that. It's ... sort of soft and peaceful. :) |
 Little girl Big world 2009-09-21 . chapter 1I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother. This was a beautiful poem though. Very real. |
 Isca 2009-09-18 . chapter 1This poem is very raw and personal. I'm sorry about your grandmother's passing. I really liked the idea that death evokes this sense of 'finality' within us that deeply shakes us; we realize, like you said, that we can't go back and fix/change things. Great work. |