wow, this is amazing! all the imagery and diction was completely perfect. i especially loved these lines "bones stretching upwards like they've just awoken beneath his cheeks." that, to me, is so fresh and unique. love it.
the whole thing was spectacular, really.

i would love opinions from a writer like you on my work; it would mean a lot to me!

Wow, the imagery and description. Well-done. :D

"Bones stretching upwards." That's definitely an interesting and unique definition of 'pretty.'

"A Nutmeg Moth." Lovely imagery! :)

"Cassiopeia's throne." Nice allusion.

"He becomes a hallucination. Two peaked dunes." Powerful ending!

this is really gorgeous, and your way of using detail and descriptiveness is fantastic. great work.