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StickIntrinsic 2009-10-01 . chapter 1
Hey this is a not just a nice faith piece, it is a nice piece all together. Sometimes life is tough but God can fill a part of our lives that cannot really be found other places. I like it.
Isca 2009-09-18 . chapter 1
"And the secrets of the stars still remain a mystery." Good. I like this line. You imply that it is 'good' for one not to 'know' everything--that's very interesting in a spiritual/religious sense.

"But I believe in You still." The tone of this line is very powerful and makes this line quite captivating.
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