 xokaliox22 2009-09-18 . chapter 1Hi Rachel,
I think that this idea was really creative. It was very simple but at the same time I don't usually see things like these. I know younger people sometimes do these but these were all good facts. You constantly impress me with your work. The only advice I have to give is to make sure that you capitalize everything that needs to be. I know that most things are but occasionally I notice things that are lowercase.
~Kali |