Hey you.

So this is a great nomination for the writing prompt. But I have to agree with the other reviews.

This one-shot has so much potential, that there is no way that you cannot make this into a full fledged story.
I want to know more about Katharine. I want to know what he promised her and what he made her. Who is the guy that took her back?
I want to know everything.

This is an amazing story. It makes you feel for this girl and her broken soul. I want to know more, but the ending was perfect. It left me thinking about it and honestly, your an amazing writer.

Keep up the incredible work!

--Alex

Whoa. Really dark and gothic. I LOVE IT! You have to continue with this! It is just so awesome! You're a brilliant writer. Katharine sounds like someone I could identify with. I can understand the whole not happy with who you are thing. I was that way for the longest time. Now my life seems like it's going to be tolerable. That is until someone dies and that always happens. Then you hope to see their ghost and have proof of the afterlife. Such is the way of things, or at least for me it is. Call me crazy or whatever. This is just me. And you're going to hear a lot more from me. So have a happy afterlife!
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