|Reviews for My Precious Darling|
| meowmie 1/3/13 . chapter 1
| England-Obsessed-Desi 10/6/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoy your writing. The plots make sense, and the story itself brings a smile to your face.
Your grammar is well-done actually (few mistakes and run-ons here and there, but really, you pay GOOD attention to your logistical language when you are writing.)
As a side note, Jerome does seem pretty cute. :)
Well done! :D I look forward to reading more of your work soon!
| renegade01 4/25/11 . chapter 1
Haha, this made me grin. I love it when she walks up to Jerome and shouts "my precious darling!" Lol, that was funny. Her obsession with pens is cute...and special. ;)
Just a few things: "Now where're getting off topic." - 'where're' should be we're. Also, since its written, OK should be written as okay unless its meant to be deliberate like to show a text or something. You do write 'okay' in full once so its probably better to do throughout for consistency.
Otherwise, cute oneshot. ;)
| dear-llama 2/19/10 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so cute! And hilarious XD Awesome :)
| mysilenceknot 11/15/09 . chapter 1
HAHAHAH i know someone just like that. we call her chokola. ;)
lol pretty good story. i particularly liked that inner debate melanie had with herself when she was deciding whether or not to give back his poem LOL.
um the only mistake i found was these you'res. they're meant to be yours. "you’re hair is not messy, you’re clothes aren’t crinkled" other than that (Y) :D
| Beautiful Destination 10/31/09 . chapter 1
Haha this story is really funny! I love inky pens too, now that I think about it ;)
| xxXNightsareDaysXxx 10/12/09 . chapter 1
| Finwe 9/28/09 . chapter 1
Ahhahhah! This was AWESOME! I am SO sharing this with my friend! (This is totally the kind of humor she would appreciate. *grins*) Thanks for a job well done!
| A-Cup-Of-Air 9/20/09 . chapter 1
It was really sweet! Melanie was a little crazy, but I liked it.
Who would like to stole my darling pen?:D
| pinky 9/19/09 . chapter 1
Damn, I would be melted, in a gooyey little puddle after reading a poem like that, just for me:P, you would need bleach to get me off that floor. Ahh, I'll just stick with a man who feels that way, thanks, that was a fun read.
| asianinvasion0530 9/19/09 . chapter 1
Aww cute. ]
| ithinkyourgay 9/18/09 . chapter 1
I LOVVE THIS ONESHOT!
finally you posted one again.
i love how the story starts in the beginning about her friend thinking that her precious darling was her virginity.
that was funny.
i like the note that jerome wrote for melanie.
it was so SWEET.
have a new story up soon!
| MaPluie 9/18/09 . chapter 1
pure fluff. but cute! ;D
| sne8989 9/18/09 . chapter 1
aw, that was cute. Nice job!
| songbirdalice 9/18/09 . chapter 1
aw that was cute. i like melanie, she's funny. woo inky pens!