Utterly cute!

Hello. :)

I really enjoy your writing. The plots make sense, and the story itself brings a smile to your face.

Your grammar is well-done actually (few mistakes and run-ons here and there, but really, you pay GOOD attention to your logistical language when you are writing.)

As a side note, Jerome does seem pretty cute. :)

Well done! :D I look forward to reading more of your work soon!

Haha, this made me grin. I love it when she walks up to Jerome and shouts "my precious darling!" Lol, that was funny. Her obsession with pens is cute...and special. ;)

Just a few things: "Now where're getting off topic." - 'where're' should be we're. Also, since its written, OK should be written as okay unless its meant to be deliberate like to show a text or something. You do write 'okay' in full once so its probably better to do throughout for consistency.

Otherwise, cute oneshot. ;)

Aw! That was so cute! And hilarious XD Awesome :)

HAHAHAH i know someone just like that. we call her chokola. ;)

lol pretty good story. i particularly liked that inner debate melanie had with herself when she was deciding whether or not to give back his poem LOL.

um the only mistake i found was these you'res. they're meant to be yours. "you’re hair is not messy, you’re clothes aren’t crinkled" other than that (Y) :D

Haha this story is really funny! I love inky pens too, now that I think about it ;)

Aw...AH-SO-SWEET!

Ahhahhah! This was AWESOME! I am SO sharing this with my friend! (This is totally the kind of humor she would appreciate. *grins*) Thanks for a job well done!

It was really sweet! Melanie was a little crazy, but I liked it.

Who would like to stole my darling pen?:D

Damn, I would be melted, in a gooyey little puddle after reading a poem like that, just for me:P, you would need bleach to get me off that floor. Ahh, I'll just stick with a man who feels that way, thanks, that was a fun read.

Aww cute. ]

I LOVVE THIS ONESHOT!

finally you posted one again.

i love how the story starts in the beginning about her friend thinking that her precious darling was her virginity.

that was funny.

i like the note that jerome wrote for melanie.

it was so SWEET.

good work.

have a new story up soon!

pure fluff. but cute! ;D

aw, that was cute. Nice job!

aw that was cute. i like melanie, she's funny. woo inky pens!