 Devilish Kisses 2009-12-09 . chapter 17Can't wait for more! |
 u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME 2009-12-09 . chapter 17the name of this chapter really got me scared for a second lol i thought it was going to be an authors note |
 twilight24 2009-12-08 . chapter 17Aw, that was duch a cute chapter! they both care about each other, they both seem jealous if someone else is with the other, they both seem sincere about their growing feeling for each other and what Gemma said about the reasons why she loved Daniel seemed to have a ring of truth to it. I wonder how Gemma reacted afer Daniel's last words in the chapter |
 helzyeah 2009-12-08 . chapter 17oh! cute! but ill bet you'll continue the next chappie a few day after and she'll have a flashback of how they shared a moment...maybe a kiss and now she is all awkward around him cause she has feeling for him.
or you'll keep going on, but if i got it write can i have a chapter dedication??
hahaha! jokes:)
very nice chapter tho!
-helzyeah |
 xWolves-R-Lovex 2009-12-07 . chapter 17Great chapter! Finally, Daniel's showing a bit of jealousy n_n
Update soon!
xWolves-R-Lovex |
 pbgurl 2009-12-07 . chapter 17oh things really seem to be moving along in their relationship. ^_^
And yay, she got rid of Troy, he was a jack*ss anyway.
By the way, I remember you mentioning once that you were a fan of Alice in wonderland. I totally reccomend you the Syfy channel's modernized version of the story. Its called Alice. It was pretty good! :)
-Liz :D |
 CLocKRabBiT 2009-12-07 . chapter 17Aw. Cute ending. Daniel marry ME! |
 Lily Laurence 2009-12-07 . chapter 17aw - keep writing! |
 notjustink 2009-12-07 . chapter 17So, it's my birthday today, and this is the only story alert I got today, so thank you very much. :) It was such a great chapter, and I love how Gemma pretty much told off Troy. |
 Ck90 2009-12-07 . chapter 17KYA! It is way to cute! I love it!
happy writings! |
 Evanescence's Love 2009-12-07 . chapter 17Finals next week...anyways since i happen to like playing 'Guess that Bad Guy' I think that Troy is an spy or an assassin. It isn't a stupid idea...Alex Rider is a 14 year old spy...well i rather not spoil it for people. At the moment my cat wants to use me as his own personal scratching post. Damn its cute eyes. |
 violet-eyez 2009-12-07 . chapter 17can't wait for the next chapter, so when is she going to get into a dangerous situation and daniel comes and saves her? |
 Madison Clarke 2009-12-07 . chapter 17your story is really great...i wana know whats going to happen. so you know what that means?...you needa be a really awsum author and update! |
 Smiling Serenade 2009-12-07 . chapter 17aw, cute chapter. i like that she didn't get upset over the eavesdropping again, haha. and how they're both still somewhat pleasantly confused about each other. :) |
 xoxokristen 2009-12-07 . chapter 17good chapter! please update again soon! |