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SiLlhe 2009-11-26 . chapter 8
Wow, this story is AWESOME. =D I was just prancing around fictionpress when I stumbled upon it, and I just couldn't stop reading!! I wonder if Spencer really does have some mental problems and is cutting himself. Maybe there really are monsters out to get him? I can't wait till chapter! Update soon! ^_^
Malulie 2009-11-05 . chapter 8
I'm likin' the story so far. =3

Although I still do question Spencer's sanity level.
But, I doubt he cuts himself.
But, than again, you are the Author(ess) so I trust you'll reveal the truth eventually. ;]

I like Spencer.
We have something in common.
We like our men big and muscular.
xD
Stormyclouds 2009-10-31 . chapter 8
Yay you updated! I love this story. It's so interesting, and quite psychological to a point. Update soon please!!
writingright 2009-10-31 . chapter 8
I love this story and I had the song playing on repeat for the whole time I was reading this XD I love it soo much excellent premise. Makes you wonder if the monsters are really real or if they're in Spencer's head and if they are real when or if Chase will realize..
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-10-31 . chapter 8
dun-dun-DUN! :D
thnx for the update!
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-10-27 . chapter 7
it pisses me off how chase isn't just THERE for spencer. i wanna give spencer a hug :P
Stormyclouds 2009-10-07 . chapter 7
Awesome chapter! Update soon!
Clarity's Sake 2009-10-06 . chapter 7
The monsters chill me to the core, seriously. The story is good so far, so have it in mind that if you make Spencer a loony, I'll have to kill you :D. Anyways, the cliffy is killing me and i can't wait for you to update. Stupid Chase >.>!
-The.Voices.Are.Loud.Today- 2009-10-01 . chapter 6
Wow, this is great!! You really have me feeling for Spencer. I keep picturing that monster in my head giving me the strongest urge to draw it myself so I hope you wouldn't take offense in me attempting that.
Anyway, your story is amazing and I hope to read more from you soon.
-Squeedle
house of flies 2009-09-29 . chapter 6
ooh, spooky and scary...
Alumina 2009-09-29 . chapter 6
Just stumbled upon this story and I really like it! Can't wait to read more.
calamity jane 2009-09-29 . chapter 6
OMG I feel so bad for Spencer. The poor kid has been thru more than his share. I'm curious as to why the monster won't attack him when he's w/Chase.

Thanks for the updates!
Stormyclouds 2009-09-26 . chapter 5
Aww, poor Spencer, he's so cute and alone in this! Update soon!
eVil-uNicorns 2009-09-25 . chapter 5
oh my god, I wonder what's this monster's deal. And poor Spencer, I don't know what I'd do if some monster was crawling in my bed so often, cutting me and causing me to lose my foster parents. Sad. And weird. I wonder why the monster is doing this...

And then there's Chase. So Spencer did write, but Chase just never wrote back? Or did the letters never get to him, perhaps? hm. I did love the part where Chase was jealous again! I love jealous characters, even if it's a small bit, it's still pretty interesting to read.

Now, back to the monsters again (since its on my mind). What does it look like again? Well, I guess I can go back to the first chapter and reread it. I'm pretty sure you put a description of it. I'll definitely check it out. But I was also curious as to what Spencer was talking about when he said: Why did it only torment him when they both committed the crime? Was that them going to the tree, or was it something else? Gah, now I have more questions that I want answers to. Like, another one (I know for a fact you can't answer any of these, but hopefully this one), is what the monster doing to Spencer in any way sexual or will be? It seems odd that he's causing him to be alone on purpose (at least I think) and then he's also saying things like, 'pretty, so pretty'. Then again, the monster could be punishing him like he said, but for some reason I don't think it's the case.

Gah, I don't know! Anyway, awesome chapter! I loved that we got more of the monster in this, not only did we get more questions, but also a few small tidbits of answers. Like how Spencer met his friends, and then the fact that the monster hasn't left Spencer alone and why he hasn't been adopted, and then... well, I'm sure there was more but for some reason my mind is at a blank. Must be because it’s late and I’m tired *yawn* but it was nice to be able to read the new chapter before I go to sleep. Keep the updates coming! So far this story is really picking up and I can’t wait to find out more :) loved the chapter by the way!

eVil uNicorns
Mollie Rose 2009-09-25 . chapter 4
Fair point too.
I would be afraid of the dark if that happened to ME!
I want to know more about Jack... Please?
Spencer is like... ARGH his mood swings are giving me whiplash!
Want, hate, want, hate. ect.
Anyways g2g!
WRITE MORE SOON!
And that's an order.
Xx Alice xX
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