|Reviews for Secrets|
| melanie27 6/6/10 . chapter 32
Nice ending! I knew she was sick, I just had no idea it was cancer! Awesome foreshadowing!
Of course, you already wrote in one of your author's notes that you have to clean up your chapters. They're actually pretty well written, it's just a few spelling and grammar errors and dialogue issues that need to be fixed. But great story nonetheless!
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo 12/6/09 . chapter 32
This was so...amazing, unexpected, and awesome.
I loved this story to pieces and I'm almost sad to see it end, but I guess all good things have to end somtime.
I will look forward to reading more of your work, I hope you come up with somthing just as good, if not better.
Never give up writting!
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo 11/30/09 . chapter 31
This was so intence!
I can't wait untill you update again!
I'm going to be going crazy untill I know what is wrong with Gabby!
Please update soon!
| Aliana L 11/29/09 . chapter 27
Realy good! Keeps getting better...But I wonder if Avery and Jacob will want to go to the hospital?
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo 11/28/09 . chapter 30
WOT! you updated, this made my day :D
HAha best line, I think in the whole story so far: "Guys. They are so useless."
hahahahahahaha. I seriously read that line like 3 times and laughed histaricly. Even though, I'm pretty sure that it wasn't supposed to be that funny, I found it hilarious.
I sure hope Aiden only sees Hazle as a friend still.
Loved this chapter!
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo 11/10/09 . chapter 29
Aw. Poor Brittany!
Very good chapter :)
Can't wait to read more.
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo 11/8/09 . chapter 28
YAY YOU UPDATED!
This chapter was so cute, I loved it!
It's about time those two got together! lol.
| Hannicki 11/6/09 . chapter 27
Omg so dramatic!
LOL this is an amazing story
and if you remember to start a new paragraph every time a new person speeks,
it would be totally awesome!
I don't think Gabby is cheating with Nate because why would she need medication for that?
I KNEW Andrew was the father!
Haha goody two shoes Andrew *gasp*
LOL update soon!
| xXMusicOfTheMoonAndStarsXx 11/1/09 . chapter 25
I have returned :)
So sorry for not reviewing in like forever
Been soo busy. Deff liked this chapter.
I think the babydaddy is Anothney?
Maybe. I'm not sure maybe more background. And no haha.
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo 10/27/09 . chapter 27
I think that you should finish it and then edit it. I promise to read the edited version as well. But I wanna know what happens.
| Pricilla 10/27/09 . chapter 27
finish the story first! it was really good!
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo 10/26/09 . chapter 26
DO gabby and nate actually have a secret relashinship, or did everyone just jump to conclusions and there's gona be a twist? haha.
People are most likley going to begin finding out that anthony is the father of that baby, that's not gonna be good for his rep.
I think that it's good that hazle finally found somone but highschool relashinship most likley don't last forever.
haha i answered all your question things :D
I continue to follow this one, it keeps me wanting more :D
| Stefany Sungold 10/20/09 . chapter 25
ah-mazing as always! the story just tickles me pink! anyways its really good and im enjoying all of it and duh! Anthony is the father! lol kep up the excellent writing!
| pachanga 10/14/09 . chapter 24
i cant believe i read this whole story. it was kinda suckish and poorly worded. i have to say its a shame though because the story line is great. it should just be a bit more developed. and its kind of outrageous that a really big event happens in each chapter. you have too many main characters! your confusing me half of the time and i had no idea what was going on during the camping trip. you should stick to maybe 6 Main characters and then have a few regulars. dont get me wrong i actually did like your story and dont take this as a negative i was just voicing my opinion!
| kangawu12 10/14/09 . chapter 24
o liked the clifhanger trick!