 Elle Winters 9 2009-11-24 . chapter 1Oh wow that was good I thought it was a long chapter for a story and only when I got to the end couldn't find the next arrow button and scrolled up did I realize that it was a short story. But my did Iike it, your characters are great as always. |
 LimeSmoothie 2009-11-14 . chapter 1you're such a winner. loved this :) |
 nonaccount 2009-11-02 . chapter 1Awesome! I love snarky, mean characters! :) |
 Caseus 2009-10-04 . chapter 1 YAY ! I liked this!! 8D
Except the ending's wording. It was awkward xD
Imma fave later when I log in. |
 i-wish-i-had-wings 2009-10-01 . chapter 1i like cade, he seems like a sane person! arcadian.. *snickers* i wouldn't want to be called that either lol |
 crack the sky 2009-09-23 . chapter 1so, yeah, this is being favorited because gabe's awesome (: |
 Loveless Breath 2009-09-20 . chapter 1AW! I love it. It's so funny and awesome. I like it. |
 Riku21 2009-09-20 . chapter 1I loved it. :D it was so sweet. I really like the characters too. It would be pretty cool to see a sequal to this. Great job as usual :) |
 NoRoadsLeft 2009-09-20 . chapter 1Aw, that's really really good. Very cute, but not stereotype slash story at all, thank god. Cade and Gabe were very adorable yet a bit deeper than in most romance stories like this. So, yeah, great work. |
 .x 2009-09-19 . chapter 1 Aww, I loved this.
The storyline and characters are really awesome XD |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Spaz! I love this. I don't know why. Probably because I'm smart, and a lot of dumbasses would had thought that he was going to get with Zeke, and I was like, uh-uh, he's totally getting with the kid from the cafe.
This totally just made my day. They're so cute. They make me want to jump in the middle of the street and start dancing and singing "I Wanna" really loudly. Probably 'cause I was just at an AAR concert, but whatev. I love them. They're just like... adorable. And cliched. But... in a wonderful, fabulous way.
Big hearts. Love it :D |
 xdinoxcorex 2009-09-19 . chapter 1I like them keep them they are cute yes please thank you run on sentence. |
 The-Camster 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Just adorable! I love how it jumps between the more present and what had happened in the past. You also write the 1st person point of view really well. I'm usually more partial to 3rd, but this was a well-done first. Nice job! ^__^
*shifty eyes* More? :D |
 xSadistxFujix 2009-09-19 . chapter 1Oh my freaking God, I love them! I LOVE these characters! So amusing, so awesome, and so REAL! This was awesome, and some day, I will definitely hope to see that sequel. :D |