 Bickazer 2009-12-06 . chapter 8I...I loved this.
I loved this more than any story I've ever read on this site before. I did something I've never before done while reading a story on the intenret, and that was sit down and read it all, chapter after chapter, in one sitting. I just couldn't stop. Never once was I bored. Never once did I start getting disgusted with the story, never once did I get tired of staring at words on the computer screen. I read and read and just kept reading, couldn't tear my eyes away at all.
I'll be back with a much more in depth review, as is usually my policy, but right now, my mind is just so overwhelmed and I'm feeling so giddy and wonderful and all these emotions, that there's no way I can sort my thoughts into logical words.
Thank you for a beautiful read. ^^ |
 talktome 2009-12-05 . chapter 8This was a wonderful read. You created a rather interesting world...where exhibitionism and orgies are commonplace proceedings that follow dinner. And your characters were very well-developed and easy to empathize with. I liked the ending--it was intimate and emotional a nice change from the debauchery of the rest of the story.
Thank you for sharing! |
 Sas399 2009-11-17 . chapter 8Ok, so now I've read a few of your stories and I go wondering:
Shouldn't you be doing this earning money?
Your writing is certainly good enough, emotionally satisfying with a good way of describing what's happening. See, I'm not nearly as good describing things as I want to @_@
Anyway: great story! I love the way it goes from debauchery to intimate. Marinon is cute as is Timri(on) :D I'm really glad of the way the King was shown the error of his ways, using the only power the Lord Scribe still has ;) Everyone got his revenge and they can live happily ever after *squee* |
 ireadtoomanybooks 2009-11-16 . chapter 8I think I have died and gone to heaven. This is the cutest, most emotionally amazing story I have read in a long long time... I think I have stopped breathing. WOW. And I am running out of words. GOSH you are amazingly fantasticaly gorgeously GOSH good :) |
 pivoine 2009-11-09 . chapter 8this is quite an enjoyable story. perhaps if the plot had been a little more developed I would have been completely satisfied, but eventually it is very nice. So thank you for posting this story here ! |
 Would not Could not in a Box 2009-11-05 . chapter 8wow what a fun read! This is beautifully written and highly original. I loved the story as a whole, and can't help but wonder why it hasn't gotten more attention... I loved Timri and Marinon as characters and well matched lovers.
Keep up the fantastic work!
ps my only complaint... why blot out the swear words? Considering the explicit nature of the story, the censorship on profanity seems a little unnecessary and somewhat distracting.
but anyway great stuff |
 KeitarosKeroNeko 2009-11-03 . chapter 8AH! It was bloody BRILLIANT! I can't tell you how much I ADORE this piece. After reading this I only have one question: how the hell are there only 9 replies so far? I'm completely wowed at that.
I absolutely loved your writing style; having it be so proper and sophisticated made seeing Timri lose himself all the more powerful.
Damn but if this isn't the most well-written, all-together captivating story I've read in a LONG LONG time.
At first when it ended I was a little bit peeved. My immediate reaction was that it was too abrupt, but a couple seconds later I think that it couldn't have had a better resolution. The conflict came to an end, we (the readers) were able to have our warm-fuzzies moment (for lack of a better phrase), but, most of all, it left us wanting more. Too often authors go on and on when it's obvious they have nothing to write about. I don't feel like you had that problem at all.
I'm sad that it had to come to an end, but I'm honestly...I think I'm just in awe.
I hope you have other stories posted and that you'll continue to post more stories in the future
Great work
Miranda |
 Verseprose 2009-11-03 . chapter 8It is amazingly beautiful. It is so very well written, it kept me enthralled all along and moved at times. You have a lot of talent.
I also believe you have a great title, something most stories lack. Bravo for your work, it was a nice journey. |
 littletealjar. 2009-11-01 . chapter 1WOH! :D |
 Jenny7332 2009-10-26 . chapter 8I absolutely love the way you infuse lewd language with such intelligent and emthralling language, it's brilliant :D. Couldn't stop reading XD |
 bookaholic13 2009-10-21 . chapter 8cool ! please update! |
 bookaholic13 2009-10-20 . chapter 2god that is so sad !this is a great story ! |
 Elkica 2009-09-27 . chapter 8I love it. Buy you already know that.
I'm amazed by your writing style, and of course I'm blown away every time you send me a new story, since, I don't know how you manage it, but it always better than the one before - and the one before was wonderful.
So yeah, this is not really a review, it's just me oh-ing and ah-ing over your amazingly great story. |
 Keela1221 2009-09-24 . chapter 8Wow, that was beautiful!! When the King decided he wanted Timri back I was so scared that it would have one of those sad endings, I'm so glad it wasn't. You did a really great job on this. Well done. |
 rose-by-anyothername 2009-09-24 . chapter 1Well, the fact that I decided not to be lazy and log in so I could post a review (Did you know that you have anonymous reviews disabled?) proves that I like this story. lol The idea of Statues was such an original and creative concept! I'm not usually much for smut, but the summary sounded interesting, and the story was good enough to keep me reading chapter after chapter. *bows to your brilliance* XD Nice job. =) |