oh, damn if that was my dad.. hell no, i mean my mom... dear god, holy **!! i dont even wanna predict what would happen cuz i already know...

really good and i think ur not going to fast love the sotry :) hope u update soon

Loved it, update soon!

Uh oh... This could be bad.

OH MY GOD! ONE WORD: AMAZING!
sorry about the caps but i felt it was needed. And you have the pregnancy thing pretty good except you dont usually start showing until your like five months along but other than that you did really good. and the whole plot line is very attention gettin as so many young people can relate these days. i hope you update soon...pretty please? lol

Okay, so I've never been pregnant either, so I can't be of much help I suppose.

I guess at about 2 1/2 months you'd start to see a bump (but probably only if you were really looking).

The urine test is accurate. i know the doctors can see if you're pregnant ( I mean, c'mon that's how a home pregnancy test works). About how long it takes, I'm unsure, but the internet is a wonderful place to do research.

OMG her dad just found out. That's not gonna be pretty, and the next chapter I can see to be a very dramatic one. But Darren doesn't know either, and her dad's gonna kill him.

I'll have to wait to find out what happens. Darn cliffes! lol. Update soon!!

pretty good... pretty good... I'll wait to see what happens next! :)

its really good
=D
update soon please

Great chapter, I'm anticapting the rest! ^_^

awe
poor hayden

well she may seem nice, but a girl like her is bound to hav her flaws.. lolz

*number 1 fan!!*

Loved it, update soon!

Lovely story. I adore it.

NEED MORE!!

Please?

update soon. :)

Aw, poor Hayden. :( It sucks when you get pregnant.

This just keeps on getting awesomer and awesomer. Darren's girlfriend! Oh my gosh! I'm loving the drama... :)