Aww nate sounds nice like the outsider but who is deeply really good looking, i have this fasination with the name Nate too probably bvecause of nate acrhibald in gossip girl. anyway god chapter.

I like your story so far.. it's just that it seems a little too fake.
Alexia seems awsome, being all tough and everything, but I mean, everybody has their own insecurities, right?

and that Cara girl.. she seems way too fake; "Oh my God Nate, your so sexy".. No one in reality would say that to someone else in a somewhat serious conversation, no matter how much they think it.

basically you need to add some depth to your characters, so they don't seem so shallow; Justin and Claire included.

and this is all constructive critiscm, so you can make your story better.