 MarloCarlo10 2009-12-05 . chapter 17Wow I didn't even think about Mitch until RIGHT after I reviwed XD
It would make total sense "I've been for a while actually" and the fact that he "dropped" by her apartment many times. But I could be wrong ;)
Hmm so Carl did the sloppy murder...I really wonder why but I guess we'll find out. |
 MarloCarlo10 2009-12-05 . chapter 16I really don't think it's Carl or at least he's the one who did the sloppy murder. I don't think he could be that meticulate or murder really, but who knows.
I hope we learn more about her and her brother...but it seems like he was in really bad shape in the past. |
 MarloCarlo10 2009-12-05 . chapter 15Hmm I bet they were arguing because you never go to your partner's apartment, it's on all the cop shows ;)
Hehe Grady's so cute with his overprotectiveness =D
Good chap |
 misatok123 2009-12-05 . chapter 17omg.. her brother =O.. Poor tess., i love ur fic *O* |
 Minzy 2009-12-04 . chapter 17Wow, I just checked this story today (I have it bookmarked ;) ) and I was so happy that there were 3 updates!! Hahaha I hadn't checked in a while because of midterms and papers > |
 kaw97 2009-12-04 . chapter 17OK, so maybe it is Mitch. That's pretty cold-hearted to do to his sister though. When they found duct tape in Carl's place, I was thinking, so what?! Doesn't everyone have duct tape? haha So, Grady is going to follow up on Mitch, but did he ever check out Phillip? He and Ted really haven't checked out every lead they have. Tsk Tsk
Please don't do a redux. I want a new story. I would love it if you had people from different stories meet - Ryan and Morgan perhaps. I love to see the old characters because they feel like family, and having them meet people we know, but they don't is kinda fun. Or you could collaborate with Caught in a Simple Game and have some of her characters in your story, because those feel like family too. You could do a geriatric story where Rob and Sidney are now divorced and Jake was killed in an accident or something, and Rob Black and Iz get together. Haha I know, I know...you don't want to kill off your characters. Oh, I know...how about Hayden Kasmarek from Shift with Morgan - haha - poor sweet Morgan. I doubt if she could handle that. OK, just put all the characters who are still single into two hats and choose random couples. That should be a SKOW challenge or something. I'll stop now. |
 SandersonSisters 2009-12-03 . chapter 17Another amazing chapter! I still think that guy that always shows up at her work is odd, but I also kind of have a feeling her brother is involved too. Lol. You have me completely stumped.
I would really love to read Ryan's story. I'm not so sure about Morgan- she always kind of annoyed me- especially in the last story. I dont know, maybe it would be interesting to see how she changed and how her relationship with the others became. Whatever you decide, know that I'll read it! |
 FauxAfflictions 2009-12-03 . chapter 17Interesting, Cool Chapter. |
 Bangle Meister 2009-12-03 . chapter 17good chapter. Thanks for the quick update. And now I'm changing my theories :P
Can't wait for more |
 Queen of Laughs 2009-12-03 . chapter 17good chapter!
cant wait for more!!
post asap!!
i always thought thee brother was bad news...
cant wait to find out!!
:D |
 metallicdiamond 2009-12-03 . chapter 16please dont tell me that Mitch is in on the killing. Because i remember you said that one of the guys is probably OCD but dont make it her little brother :( |
 ThatGirl137 2009-12-03 . chapter 17I'd love to read Ryan's story, if that helps :)
Adore all your work so i'm sure whatever you do next will be incredible! |
 Need the Happy Ending 2009-12-03 . chapter 17 Ryan's story would be awesome! If you redid Nathan's story that would be good too cause to be honest, I don't like that story.
I couldn't care less if you had Morgan get hit by a bus =( |
 Kandyber 2009-12-03 . chapter 17Ryan’s story! I found Megan to be annoying. She was so desperate in vicious circles that she seemed pathetic. But I would be so excited to read Ryan’s story. The poor guy deserves one, also parkers would be fun to read :)
Oh and this one is good too |
 Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2009-12-03 . chapter 17love the chappy its totally the brother!
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