Damn, I was wrong but I guess hardly anyone thought it was her. Carl shouldn't have done a runner, gave himself away. Great read. Now when will it be hitting shelves? ;)

I'm in too much of a hurry to finish this hence the unsigned review. Possible killers: Tess's brother (he did hate her job right? And didn't seem to like the idea of a cop around.), Phillip- the obvious one...and Ted? Lol although with the last one I think Righteous Kills the movie may have frazzled my brain.

Very well written. Extremely awesome plot. Never suspected Michelle..

And the suspense just keeps building.
Your plot line reminds me a little of Blink..

Beautifully written. Only the second chapter and I'm already hooked.

lovely ending... not too rushed. one of your better stories :)

Aw, I love the ending. (:
Then again, I'm a sucker for happy endings.
But what happens to poor Coty? D: Does she ever get better? :/

Wait, I'm just a tad bit confused. In the first Chapter, was the quiet guy that always requested to sit in Tess's section just some random guy, or was he Detective Werner?

Because he was Grady, why didn't she recognize him?

this was wonderful...

I really liked the ending and the different P.V!! It was cool to see what Grady's up too ;)

Tina

oh~ Thanks SO much for this awesome story! :D
:D :D :D
u never cease to amaze me with all of your amazing stories and ur tremendous writing skills! ;P
Thanks again and hope you have a sequel soon!! :D :D :)

Love it =)

amazing

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will be looking out for the sequel, defo.

and please don't laugh TOO much at all the wild guesses I was making earlier on. I've never really been good at guessing at who the killer is in any story or show except CSI.

Damn CSI for being predictable :)

NO!

omg, i feel so stupid now. How the hell could I have assumed it was Philip and Mitch!? It was Carl and Michelle all along! omg omg omg

Wow, you've suceeded in pulling the wool over my eyes. I think this deserves a place in my favs for that very reason :)

I hope Tess is saved, please please please!

I'm out of the loop now...

A WOMAN?! Boy, why didn't I think of that?! How can I be so sexist to my own gender group?!

This has so many twists, I love it. I'm going to shut up with my predictions now and see how this plays out.

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