|Reviews for The Butterfly|
| seredemia 6/22/10 . chapter 1
Hehe. It seems were having a little review war going on between us now
I really really loved how you called the butterfly a winged tiger! That was really clever, cos they do look like wigned tigers, dont they? Well, it depends on their patterned wings.
I think you described the butterfly's beauty perfectly. They are pretty creatures... Very beautiful description. I think that's what is so good about this piece. Your descriptions. :)
| DarkRose1221 12/12/09 . chapter 1
:D I told you I was interested! I love you poems so far ( have only read 3) The Butterfly and The Rose made me very sad :( but The Tiger was wicked sweet! I'm off to read more of your stuff! tahtah!
| 8DaysTillSunday 10/8/09 . chapter 1
This one was great too.
And the comparison between a tiger and a butterfly, the only difference being wings, was very clever. Not much else to say except that this was amazing, and I loved the imagery.
| KelaBelle 10/7/09 . chapter 1
Very clever, I like how you did it froma bettles point of view, very classy.
| ADSpencer 10/7/09 . chapter 1
Poor beetle :(
Great poem, though. I really liked that you chose to use long lines in this poem. The long lines laid so flat and short that they helped me form a visual of a small insect being far below, close to the ground. Nicely done.
| Frayling0 10/5/09 . chapter 1
One of the most original poems I've read considering the whole bug viewpoint thing. Some beautiful imagery and a nice, poignant last line. Great work :D Luke
| kloun mannequin 9/25/09 . chapter 1
the ending's sad, the imagery's beautiful and peaceful, I can imagine a place like paradise.
| scripted 9/21/09 . chapter 1
This is odd...I never thought I'd feel so much heartbreak for a beetle before xP
Well, that only shows compliment to the writer :P And man do you deserve the compliment...
You're too good at poems!
Description is beautifully done, and the emotion behind it is so good...
Such a sad end T.T
Write again soon! :D