i totally frigging love this. powerful last line, powerful first line, and i have no complaints about the middle. "i am a child of substance and revolution." you know it.

deanna

you have this really wonderful style. i'm excited to read more of your work, please update soon!

This is just amazing. "so i can draw on their minds with permanent marker" like your making them believe whatever you believe. This was all so creative and truly wonderful. Well written.

Adding to Favorites :)

ah the essence of those women who make one just a little crazy

This really clever.

I'm going to save this and stick it on my wall.

-Jessica