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Isca 2009-09-25 . chapter 1
"Myriad sins." Nice word choice.

"The gravity that ties me to this." Very powerful, indeed.

"Blind perception." This part reminded me of a 'sensory-deprivation tank.'

"Wherein I am not imprisoned." This is my favourite part--it's quite crafty and profound.
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